This was inspired by
's prompt: "A self-portrait poem gives a glimpse into your inner world through the lens of someone other than yourself. When writing a self-portrait poem, the aim is to put yourself in the shoes of someone else, to see how they might experience the world."It was a fascinating prompt, imagining how others might see me and what their perspective might be. Illustrated versions are coming later! This is part of the Whiskey & Flowers collection. I hope you enjoy them.
I. (from the perspective of an old leather jacket) I know the shape of his shoulders when he is brave, and when he is broken. I smell of his cigarettes, the rain from a thousand cities, and a little bit like her. I hold him together on roads that try to tear him apart.
II. (from the perspective of his whiskey glass) They see the poet. I see the man. I know the tremor in his hands as he chases one perfect word into the long hours of the night. I know the taste of his ghosts.
III. (from the perspective of the moon) The world gets his sunny afternoons. I have his midnights. The lonely drives, the silent screaming, the boy who still looks up at me wondering if he’ll ever be enough. He shines most, I think, when he believes he is lost in the dark.
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Fabulous evocative insights
These are little gems. The final paragraph of each one is like a shard of glass piercing your soul 🥺